Blognovela: Síndrome de Pertenencia (Capitulo I) + 10 posts favoritos de Noviembre

Desde hace algún tiempo he tenido este sueño recurrente, donde veo, a una muchacha, una amiga, caminando triste por un aeropuerto, despidiendose así de un país que le ha traído lo mejor y lo peor de su vida. El país que la vió nacer, y que plácidamente la acobijó en sus brazos.

En estos momentos cuando los animos están caldeados en nuestro país por la tortuosa lucha política que se lleva a cabo, lo importante es nunca olvidar lo que somos todos y cada uno de nosotros... Venezolanos...

Y nunca dejar de sufrir el "Síndrome de Pertenencia", ese orgullo que da decir en un lugar, yo soy Venezolano.

Inspirado en esto, escribí mi segunda Blognovela, con su particular rima, y con los toques sarcásticos que me caracterizan. Aquí les dejó el primer cápitulo:

Síndrome de Pertenencia

Cápitulo I: Errores del Pasado


En el aeropuerto sentada


actuando como turista


se encontraba María Gracia


leyendo varias revistas



Tenía ya algunos años


que no volvía a Venezuela


y aunque en ella había crecido


no sabía ni de su abuela



Vestida toda a la mode


como cualquier parisina


derrochaba ella glamour


desde Hong Kong hasta China



4 años de francés


y unos 5 de alemán


el ingles ya manejaba


que más podía cotorrear?




Ya montada en un carrito


se dirigía a su hogar


mirando fijo a los ranchos


que adornaban el lugar




Caracas, tan decadente


metropolis bivalente


nada que ver con Lisboa,


ni con París, ni con Nientes




Pero que hace aquí una chica


que el exito había logrado?


extrañaría las arepas?


o el clima de valle aislado?




Lo cierto es que ya está aquí


y no existe vuelta atrás


a que vendría María Gracia


ya nos vamos a enterar



Para entender el presente


hay que mirar al pasado


revisemos con cuidado


lo que María ha olvidado



Cumpliendo 15 ella estaba


cuando escuchó la propuesta


Te mandamos a Madrid


o prefieres una fiesta?



Los ojos de la muchacha


iluminaron su rostro


prefiriría ver el mundo


o un cumpleaños pomposo?



A Madrid partió la chica


un 29 de Agosto


y en un parpadear de ojos


arrivó con todo y bolsos




Madrid era hipnotizante


y no solo por su historia,


por sus calles empedradas


o monumentos de gloria




La oscuridad de la noche


de la concurrida España


le mostraba un mundo nuevo


a la joven María Gracia




Morbosa juventud espectral


abarrotaba los antros


y los ritos de la urbe


lento la iban hechizando



Así María decidió


a su casa no volver,


Europa le proveía todo,


sexo, drogas y placer.



Continuará...

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